I think your img tags are correct, but this: "http://gallery.me.com/jkwinchester1#100309/IMG_0599&bgcolor=black" does not point to an image.
Go to the image, right click on it, and choose "Copy Image Location". Then paste that into the img tags. It needs to be an image file, like a jpg.
Okkkk. Here we go!
And just for good measure I'll try a second one...
Hmmm, no luck. I'll try editing everything after '.jpg' from the address.
Hallelujah!! It works, wonders never cease...here is the second one, modified as well...